Thanks! Butter, because I read somewhere sulfur cakes are soft, nothing that mysterious.
Odd, because it is so short it seems like a riddle, and I had many guesses that almost fit, because I ignored the title.
they told about me…
You know that some of us ignore the title?
I like the use of indentations- the form of this poem reminds me of a saw.
I like this little poem, and I think it could go on. The only word that stuck out as a bit odd is “butter.”
Thanks for sharing!
Thanks! Butter, because I read somewhere sulfur cakes are soft, nothing that mysterious.
Odd, because it is so short it seems like a riddle, and I had many guesses that almost fit, because I ignored the title.
they told about me…
You know that some of us ignore the title?
Yeah, initially I was thinking I’ll go with something like “At Lake Sulfurica”, this one’s ok too.