Old age ravishes the young who think
they will never be alone or
frail in bodily functions
or trembling, cracked with
mind bright making the
heart more wanting,
desperate
for a
friend.
Hour 12
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
Old age ravishes the young who think
they will never be alone or
frail in bodily functions
or trembling, cracked with
mind bright making the
heart more wanting,
desperate
for a
friend.
Hour 12
Poignant. And well done with the Nonet form!
This is the first time I’ve tried this form and I spent so much time counting and recounting syllables. It was worth it though to write a poem in honor of my husband’s elderly aunt who calls frequently out of loneliness. It’s heartbreaking on so many levels. Thank you for your kind words.
I agree with gmazul. This is a heart-wrenching nonet – well done! I recently began supporting seniors through writing and this year has been particularly challenging for them around connecting and feeling, connected. Thanks for this poem!
Thank you for your kind words. I think I will submit this one to be considered for
the anthology!
Awesome!! Good luck with your submissions. I haven’t figured out which two I will send, yet. Soon… 🙂