2 thoughts on “hour twenty two

  1. Beautiful poem! I read your description above and I can’t stop thinking about your thesis-impressive. Now to this lovely poem… I loved your use of simile…just like Narcissus in a pond (might I suggest “floating” in the pond…just to add further alliteration with next line?) Personification of the flower is great…I notice blue clouds flowing past me/and get lost/out of the blue…

    Out of the blue or into the blue??? 🙂 Great poem and work!

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