Hour 6: Rain

A soft wind carries

our laughs, our voices

to reach the distant-most memories

 

The water is cold

I don’t like it but

it’s still fun

 

To dance in the rain

with you.

My heart is full of warmth

One thought on “Hour 6: Rain

  1. At this rate every poem by you is going to get a comment it feels like. This one is very reminiscent of haiku in both its rhythm and style. Each stanza is its own snapshot yet they flow into each other like a 3 tiered cake. I love it.

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