Two old women got into a spat
One left the room, the other just sat
Who was winner of this argument?
The one who stayed or the one who went?
What does it matter who really wins?
Two old women no longer are friends
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Two old women got into a spat
One left the room, the other just sat
Who was winner of this argument?
The one who stayed or the one who went?
What does it matter who really wins?
Two old women no longer are friends
Oh I love this! Concise, brief, and completely absorbing. A wonderful description of human nature and the arguments that can tear friendships apart. You’ve made these controlled rhyming couplets work perfectly for you. Just beautiful.
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