(Hour 22) 19.30pm-20.30pm. PROMPT, technology in the context of nature

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i don’t want to be petty

yet mountains that scar the sky
with their antique beauty ;
greens so lush they eat the eye ;

fifty more snapshots of the Grand Canal ;
or the view after hiking the ruins
of once mighty Machu Pichu

give me nothing except
a vicarious envy i wish
i could hide — but can’t

One thought on “(Hour 22) 19.30pm-20.30pm. PROMPT, technology in the context of nature

  1. The title grabbed me immediately. Facebook does lead us into a bit of envy, I agree. Selfies everywhere, and I wish I could be there in those places. Then again, I miss out on where I am at the time. I sighed reading the numerous photos of the Grand Canal and “once mighty Machu Pichu.”

    These are other points I really enjoy here:
    -succinct wording that captures the emotions clearly
    -“greens so lush they eat the eye” oddly seemed exquisite but not painful (eat and lush make for a lovely pairing)

    What fun to travel now, or just take a walk away from technology.

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