the little bird : is making me : weep : as she always does : thinking of : what i’ve lost : & may never have
One thought on “(Hour 24) 21.30pm-22.30pm. PROMPT, theme: “something others aren’t doing””
Garth-Gorgeous! This is a short poem but very sublime. It plays upon our knowledge of cliches…e.g. the bird flew the coop, a bird in the hand is worth two in the bush. Yes, isn’t it amazing how birds can make us think of such dichotomous ideas? I loved this poem for its very striking simplicity-beautiful! It moves well too!
Garth-Gorgeous! This is a short poem but very sublime. It plays upon our knowledge of cliches…e.g. the bird flew the coop, a bird in the hand is worth two in the bush. Yes, isn’t it amazing how birds can make us think of such dichotomous ideas? I loved this poem for its very striking simplicity-beautiful! It moves well too!