Poets craving constructive criticism

We’re all gentle with each other, and we love the cheerleading.

But we crave honest, direct, fulsome opinions of content and writing style. We want to know what our readers find effective and where we lose them.

Re-post a poem here, get advice. Read a poem here, give advice.

Questions and constructive criticism only, positive or negative. Try to be specific and offer solutions for ineffective passages. Feel free to gush if it really cuts you to the quick.