Hot Day
Hard Rock Cafe
Jesus is trying to find
someone to grind.
He’s very pale, wearing
red shorts.
In the pool he’s trying
water sports.
In the corner
girls are twerking.
I wonder how his salvation
is working.
He’s rather dry
and orders a beer.
Good thing there’s
no crucifixion here.
J. Pratt-Walter
6/22/2019
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Quite wry and extremely vivid because of all the actions you’ve added. It warranted a second reading, which I enjoyed. Keep writing!
Thanks so much!