Oasis Posted on August 5, 2017 9:31pm EDTAugust 13, 2017 11:12pm EDT by jenniferprattwalter In this fierce desert I seek the green oasis blooming in your eyes. J. Pratt-Walter © 8/2017
This is perfect. One of my favourite forms, and you handle it well. Do you ever try tanka? Just a bit more room ~ Reply
Thank you. Britton. I have not tried tanka, but I will someday. Thank you for your kind comment. Jennifer
This is perfect. One of my favourite forms, and you handle it well. Do you ever try tanka? Just a bit more room ~
Thank you. Britton. I have not tried tanka, but I will someday. Thank you for your kind comment.
Jennifer
Lovely and I can relate to it personally, so it is powerful on several levels.
Thank you, Janel. A very special person inspired this poem!