Can’t blame me
for what you didn’t do
Promises are forever
Sunsets and clouds
are above us daily
standing still in time
The gift of love
is special
in this life.
not sure I like it, what do you think, looking for feedback, Thanks
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
Can’t blame me
for what you didn’t do
Promises are forever
Sunsets and clouds
are above us daily
standing still in time
The gift of love
is special
in this life.
not sure I like it, what do you think, looking for feedback, Thanks
I think you have so much more to say here! I can feel the emotion in it. Push that. Keep going. Triple the length of this poem, then cut half the lines. Then keep writing.
Thank you. I wasn’t sure if it all worked together or should be taken apart. I will work on it as you have suggested.