11 thoughts on “Floating

  1. I was really comforted by this poem. It is beautiful! From the very first line, you “wow!” with imagery! I love the idea of being “rocked” by the lake (and I am currently missing it! You say so much and in so few words! I also loved the image of the silvery fish swimming by-wonderful! I hope you consider submitting this one…it is very, very visual.

  2. The structure of your poem supports the title. Reading it, the words sound like gentle lapping waves at the lakeshore. The words give a comforting picture. This is a really nice poem!

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