Poem #17

thinking about you
as i write
thinking about you
as i type
thinking about you
as i eat
thinking about you
as i drive
thinking about you
as i shower
thinking about you
as i cook
thinking about you
as i clean
thinking about you
as i sleep
thinking about you
as i cry
thinking about you
as you forget me.

One thought on “Poem #17

  1. I really like this. It visually represents that internal obsessive tension that wants to shout. The rhythm of the verbs is almost perfect.
    Maybe reformulate the final line as a question? Just a thought. This is a few minor tweaks away from being excellent.

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