I wrestle with words,
create the perfect advice,
I know I won't take
3 thoughts on “Dear Me”
what a wonderful haiku! a perfect distillation of self-talk. what do you think about removing the comma at the end of the second line? I found myself reading it that way…
Thank you for your thoughts. I am always open to the reader using interpretation, but I needed the comma for myself. I am that one in the circle that everyone comes to for advice, so adding a breath was more about changing from giver to receiver.
what a wonderful haiku! a perfect distillation of self-talk. what do you think about removing the comma at the end of the second line? I found myself reading it that way…
Thank you for your thoughts. I am always open to the reader using interpretation, but I needed the comma for myself. I am that one in the circle that everyone comes to for advice, so adding a breath was more about changing from giver to receiver.
This is a gem of a haiku! I love the alliteration in the first line.