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authorhj commented on the post, Poetry Marathon Anthology – Call for Submissions 5 months, 2 weeks ago
Understood! Thanks for this opportunity! 🥰
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authorhj commented on the post, Prompt 2: Magic – H.J ©️ 5 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks so much ♥️
It means a lot to me that the love I have for this person can come through so clearly, and that you felt compelled to keep returning to the poem. -
authorhj commented on the post, Dear Self (Early teen) – H.J ©️ 5 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you 🙂 I will ponder your feedback!
Hour 5 is here >> https://thepoetrymarathon.com/blog/authorhj/%EF%B8%8F-h-j-dreams-hour-5/ -
authorhj commented on the post, Till We Have Faces 5 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks! This year was brilliant. I’m finding it hard to choose for the Anthology: but, so far, I’ve set aside “Magic” and “Hour 5”. I would appreciate your feedback 😊
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authorhj commented on the post, Close to the End (7:00 AM) 5 months, 3 weeks ago
In love with this! ♥️
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authorhj commented on the post, I Survived! 5 months, 3 weeks ago
I agree; 9am is the perfect hour to start.
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authorhj commented on the post, Hour Twelve: Ascension 5 months, 3 weeks ago
♥️🥰🌟🙏
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authorhj commented on the post, For Thyself, Myself 5 months, 3 weeks ago
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authorhj commented on the post, Prompt 15, Hour 12 5 months, 3 weeks ago
🥳💐🌟🥰 Made it to the end – thank you for this wonderful opportunity! This topic is so fun and interesting, I haven’t done this since High School!
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authorhj commented on the post, To the weird girl (11, 7pm) 5 months, 3 weeks ago
🌟♥️💐 Can relate! Well done.
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authorhj commented on the post, Dear Harvey, Who’s about to be Born 5 months, 3 weeks ago
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authorhj commented on the post, Hour 11 – Graduation Card To Me at Seventeen 5 months, 3 weeks ago
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authorhj commented on the post, Stefanie at Seven 5 months, 3 weeks ago
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authorhj commented on the post, Hour 11: Dear Rose, Age 18 5 months, 3 weeks ago
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authorhj commented on the post, Hour 11: Dear Self 5 months, 3 weeks ago
♥️🌟 Incredible.
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authorhj commented on the post, Written in Hour 5 – Breathe In, Breathe Out 5 months, 3 weeks ago
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authorhj commented on the post, 5 months, 3 weeks ago
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authorhj commented on the post, My Heart is in the North 5 months, 3 weeks ago
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authorhj commented on the post, Same 5 months, 3 weeks ago
The Fault in Our Stars was also made into a movie; if you want to get to the “okay” quicker 😊 Enjoy!; and, you’re right, we do. I’m going through similar right now.
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authorhj wrote a new post, Dear Self (Early teen) – H.J ©️ 5 months, 3 weeks ago
2019 – 11th Hour
In response to the Prompt ©️ H.J~ Dear Self ~
You sit by the window,
Blue;
Unsure of what is to come for you.For now,
You’ve been a martyr.Each took their piece,
That’s true, […] - Load More
Love it!. Yes sometimes our teen years are bold , free of layers but sometimes too appreciated by others.
I love the message here. I especially love the line about being a martyr. So true for each of us
Hello,
I looked for your poem for Hour 5 and couldn’t find it. I came across this, however, and identified with your young self. I like this for your submission to the anthology. Could you add a bit more about the relationships between the audience “we” and your young teenage self? Early you write “But we still fall in love with you.” Other places you could add a version of this — “and we stand in awe of you” or “and we sigh with you” or any other comment you find true of your teenage experience.
Thank you 🙂 I will ponder your feedback!
Hour 5 is here >> https://thepoetrymarathon.com/blog/authorhj/%EF%B8%8F-h-j-dreams-hour-5/