Thank you, ma’am 🙂

I am thinking of sending this one for the anthology but wanted to make a slight change in the last line.

Would it sound better if I replace ‘write’ with ‘live’ in the last line? So it becomes, ‘let me stay up for a while, as i live one last time.’

Please tell your thoughts on this.

Umm… Does indicating our location mean we have to include our country in the introductory note? Also, do we link our pages in the email body this year too?

Beautiful…. The imagery and the ending. The expressions relatable. Well done!

As I finished reading this, a smile made its way to my lips…. This is just that kind of poem. I loved it!

I really like this one. Don’t know why… But I found it peaceful. And the imagery…. I loved this one because I could picture myself dancing on the red road (I am weird 😂)
But good expressions and flow. Well done **pats your shoulder**

I love this one…. Probably more than the baby one 😄
It’s that kind of poem which makes you feel good…. Atleast that’s what it felt like to me. The rhythm and flow are obviously good but the expressions are best. Well done **pat on your shoulder**

Aww… This was seriously cute … Heh heh. Funny and unique. I love your writing style… In other poems too. I laughed at ‘Did I forget to pay rent’, and the ending! Really good one.

Thank you 🙂

I agree with what Anne said in the first comment. You have done a lot already and we all are really grateful. It’s completely okay to take as much time as you guys need…. We’ll support you in whatever you decide. And I am sure we all are willing to wait…. Even if it takes time…. Please take care and know that for us, your well-being comes first.

The imagery! Simple yet captivating.

I know that feel **sigh**
Relatable and nostalgic but more than that… Well written!
I loved this one… Esp. the expressions in the start.

Clever. And enjoyable. Loved reading this… And the other poems too. Especially the ode to a chocolate (relatable) and dancing girls one (i think)…. Anyways, the images used are colourful and beautiful. I really loved your poems. Good job! **thumbs up**

Aww… This is so cute!
I really loved this one and especially the expressions! Really well-written, Ma’am. Well done.

Thank you… 🙂

Thank you! 🙂

Thank you 🙂

That’s a good one… Like a breeze of fresh air among serious poems…. I love the image it creates. Well done.

Wow. I like this one for too many things to count… The beautiful scene and expressions being one. Wonderful.

I loved reading this one a great deal. Felt kind of nostalgic. Really well-written, ma’am.