I love how this poem takes the reader on a journey… the ending esp. beautifully captures how time seems to be fleeting when one is having fun. Well done ^^

Agreed.. but what I wanted to say was that we do need plans to survive.. but to live.. life is what happens between plans. So while plans are important, we shouldn’t forget to stop once in a while to just breathe, take in everything around us before we start running again on the endless road of survival.
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This is such a delightful read… the flow is amazing. Well done ! ^^

Wow… I love this poem. its really well-written!

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Thank you so much for reading and commenting ^^

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True words.. and yes, it only hurt for a couple of hours during the 21st and 22nd hour. But on the brighter side, it gave me something to write about 😀

We all have darkness within us but it’s our choices that make the difference. I love this poem… I really do, it’s relatable and well-written and the theme is really good.

Beautiful words and simply a delightful read. I really like this one!
Also, I didn’t comment on those but I love your micro poems from later hours. ^^

A wonderful read… I esp. love the lines “Our journeys may vary/ but our destination is the same” and of course the second stanza is gold. Well done ^^

Wow… I seriously don’t have words how much I loved reading this… A wonderful poem. Relatable with an undercurrent of strength. Well written ^^

“The changing of the Seasons and/ Dawning of the Day/ have far more beauty than/ even I can say!” Very true and beautiful… I really like this poem but I am in love with these lines.

Thank you for the kind words… hearing it from someone whose work I admire so much really means a lot.. I will keep improving. hope you have a great day ^^

Sure! ^^