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inkspiller and
Davita Joie are now friends 8 months, 3 weeks ago
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Davita Joie commented on the post, After Dusk 9 months ago
Ah, this is lovely, whimsical. The idea that books are animated and come alive after dark is intriguing and comforting somehow.
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Davita Joie commented on the post, prompt 20 hour 20 light 9 months ago
Lovely cadence and uses of light and shadow….!
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Davita Joie commented on the post, The Little Pyro – Prompt 20, Hour 20 9 months ago
Brilliant use of sound and imagery…
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Davita Joie commented on the post, Wisdom (#12, Hour 24) [Sijo] 9 months ago
You’re welcome! It’s new to me and I really enjoyed it.
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Davita Joie commented on the post, Dear Self with Dreams of Fairy Tales and Harlequin Romance (Hour 18, #6) 9 months ago
And a fine motto it is!
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Davita Joie commented on the post, Strings of Time – Hour 23 9 months, 1 week ago
Sweetly lyrical…the final line is perfect!
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Davita Joie commented on the post, Sensory Deprivation 9 months, 1 week ago
when we have constant change, we crave stability and comfort. When we have stability and comfort, we crave change. Too much of either is terrible – what we really crave is balance. And choice. Well done.
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Davita Joie commented on the post, 24 My Parents Birthday Gift 9 months, 1 week ago
Haikus done right are so emotional and powerful…’bonsai in a book’ is inspired.
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Davita Joie commented on the post, We need change 9 months, 1 week ago
Perfectly captures our times. Poignant and resonated with me deeply
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Davita Joie commented on the post, Nightlight (Prompt 20) 9 months, 1 week ago
What a cool image – to be thought of as another’s person’s nightlight, someone who brings light into darkness….lovely premise. Well done!
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Davita Joie commented on the post, Season of the birds 9 months, 1 week ago
Fantastic details….makes the poem crackle with energy. The dogs disappointment is palpable. Well done!
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Davita Joie commented on the post, Just my type 9 months, 1 week ago
A love song to the typewriter. Lovely!
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Davita Joie commented on the post, Too Much 9 months, 1 week ago
The poem is spare but conveys so much emotion – the final line is gorgeous, a lyrical ending
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Davita Joie commented on the post, A Poet’s Dilemma 9 months, 1 week ago
nice contrast between without….and with. And true!
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Davita Joie commented on the post, Hour 17 (2020) 9 months, 1 week ago
Love ‘smooth lamentation’ and ‘sonic voodoo’…nice word choice!
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Davita Joie commented on the post, Hour 17: The Distance 9 months, 1 week ago
Lovely and moving….there’s both a tenderness and a sadness in the verse…
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Davita Joie commented on the post, Prompt 16 There is this thing 9 months, 1 week ago
A very nice encapsulation of the complicated parent-child relationship and the epiphany we all have when we realize our parents are flawed and human. Nicely done.
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Davita Joie commented on the post, Dear Self with Dreams of Fairy Tales and Harlequin Romance (Hour 18, #6) 9 months, 1 week ago
@melissa. WE are going to do better about getting our words out into the universe! I always appreciate your encouragement.
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Davita Joie commented on the post, Dear Self with Dreams of Fairy Tales and Harlequin Romance (Hour 18, #6) 9 months, 1 week ago
Aw, @jennifervera one of my favorite poets….thank you!
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