Wow. The mechanical precision in this piece is laudable. Perfect. 🥂🥂

Your Haiku Skills are mad cool Shloka. Witty, sharp, succinct and very interesting. Like…. 🤔🙂

Mind boggling and interesting. I will not question it tho. Its unsettled meaning from where i’m watching interests me too much. 👌🥂🥂

My thoughts exactly. Mesmerizing indeed. ❤ it

Simplistic and confounding. Amazing how you wrap pregnant meaning in such few words😲. Love it 🔥❤🔥

Its the voice of boundless intuition which we all have Beth. It is never anything short of amazing and wonderful. 💫💝🙏 Thank you!!

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As always, thank you Beth! I use “be met” because all desires from the point i’m speaking are one and the same. Thus, the purpose of word choice. 🙂

Thanks for your appreciation Susmita 🙂🤗

🤗 Thank you Beth!

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Thanks Susmita! 😊

Thanks Beth. Preciate your appreciation. Much ❤

Glorious!!! I love it. You’re quite easy on the hand with flow and rhythm Meredith. Your imagination is gorgeous! Thanks for writing this. Blessed my senses

You are a brilliant poet Meredith. You play with our imagination to guide us away from the meaning of your constructs. This ia a poem about life and death romanticised in lines of delicious euphemisms.

He wasn’t looking for the distractions or to them. He had come for the conflict and the end that they bring in whatever form. Then he could die…[Read more]

Rich imagery that arrests from the first line. A very delicious sounding poem. Yup because i heard the flute song as it held all of nature hypnotized.

I had to suspend logic for a bit to key into this but it still came in handy because at the end do i realize that “he” is actually a person who lies close to your heart in some way and somewhere…[Read more]

“I’m not sure employers can ever
put that Genie back in the bottle…or cubicle.”… These lines made me laugh.

I agree with the message of this poem. Suddenly we’re all paying attention to the most important part of a troubling system -“Us” and i appreciate your language and technique in taking us through the phases constituting the sea…[Read more]

Overall, very well written.
Personally, the refrain has me wishing you would not love this person forever especially considering his “situation” previously. But many a time, we’re given lemons instead of oranges and the best thing to do is make the best of what’s before us. Aka, sometimes it sucks. Lmao.

The refrain gives hope that your…[Read more]

I like how the whole subject matter is wrapped up in the last line and how the metaphors house the two ends of one stick. “Black velvet” representing “sacrifice and care” and “white satin” representing the joy that flows from the giving of the former where it is naturally willed and carried out. Concise and powerful. Love it