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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, Hour Four – 2020 7 months ago
Wow. The mechanical precision in this piece is laudable. Perfect. 🥂🥂
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, Hour Six – 2020 7 months ago
Your Haiku Skills are mad cool Shloka. Witty, sharp, succinct and very interesting. Like…. 🤔🙂
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, Hour Seven – 2020 7 months ago
Mind boggling and interesting. I will not question it tho. Its unsettled meaning from where i’m watching interests me too much. 👌🥂🥂
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, Hour Eight – 2020 7 months ago
My thoughts exactly. Mesmerizing indeed. ❤ it
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, Hour Twelve – 2020 7 months ago
Simplistic and confounding. Amazing how you wrap pregnant meaning in such few words😲. Love it 🔥❤🔥
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, 14th poem – 14th hour – Marathon – Stay here 9 months ago
Its the voice of boundless intuition which we all have Beth. It is never anything short of amazing and wonderful. 💫💝🙏 Thank you!!
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, 16th poem – 16th hour – Marathon – Mad gentle feeling 9 months ago
💝💫🙏
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, 21st poem – 21st hour – Marathon – To want? 9 months ago
As always, thank you Beth! I use “be met” because all desires from the point i’m speaking are one and the same. Thus, the purpose of word choice. 🙂
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, 22nd poem – 22nd hour – Marathon – Noon 9 months ago
Thanks for your appreciation Susmita 🙂🤗
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, 23rd poem – 23rd hour – Marathon – Pyshea 9 months ago
🤗 Thank you Beth!
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, 23rd poem – 23rd hour – Marathon – Pyshea 9 months ago
🔥❤🔥🙏
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, 3rd poem – hour 3 – Marathon – Light must be allowed 9 months ago
Thanks Susmita! 😊
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, 20th poem – 20th hour – Marathon – Beaming waterfalls 9 months ago
Thanks Beth. Preciate your appreciation. Much ❤
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, Pixie Bath 9 months, 1 week ago
Glorious!!! I love it. You’re quite easy on the hand with flow and rhythm Meredith. Your imagination is gorgeous! Thanks for writing this. Blessed my senses
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, Star-rise 9 months, 1 week ago
You are a brilliant poet Meredith. You play with our imagination to guide us away from the meaning of your constructs. This ia a poem about life and death romanticised in lines of delicious euphemisms.
He wasn’t looking for the distractions or to them. He had come for the conflict and the end that they bring in whatever form. Then he could die…[Read more]
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, Hour 5 — Sunrise on Spirit Mountain 9 months, 1 week ago
Rich imagery that arrests from the first line. A very delicious sounding poem. Yup because i heard the flute song as it held all of nature hypnotized.
I had to suspend logic for a bit to key into this but it still came in handy because at the end do i realize that “he” is actually a person who lies close to your heart in some way and somewhere…[Read more]
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, Hour 7 — Season of the Covid 9 months, 1 week ago
“I’m not sure employers can ever
put that Genie back in the bottle…or cubicle.”… These lines made me laugh.I agree with the message of this poem. Suddenly we’re all paying attention to the most important part of a troubling system -“Us” and i appreciate your language and technique in taking us through the phases constituting the sea…[Read more]
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, Hour 3 — Will I Love You Forever? 9 months, 1 week ago
Overall, very well written.
Personally, the refrain has me wishing you would not love this person forever especially considering his “situation” previously. But many a time, we’re given lemons instead of oranges and the best thing to do is make the best of what’s before us. Aka, sometimes it sucks. Lmao.The refrain gives hope that your…[Read more]
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Ivan Bekaren commented on the post, Hour 16 — Gentle Hands 9 months, 1 week ago
I like how the whole subject matter is wrapped up in the last line and how the metaphors house the two ends of one stick. “Black velvet” representing “sacrifice and care” and “white satin” representing the joy that flows from the giving of the former where it is naturally willed and carried out. Concise and powerful. Love it
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