@janiceraquelamendonca
active 5 months ago-
janiceraquelamendonca commented on the post, Prompt #12 Blackout Poetry 5 months, 1 week ago
thank you. 🙂
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janiceraquelamendonca commented on the post, Prompt #1 – I am…TIME 5 months, 1 week ago
I love it, infact I am going to take each and every tip you give me, firstly i LOVE HOW POWERFUL MY INTRO HAS BECOME. it draws you in. i like it. thank you soooo much
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janiceraquelamendonca commented on the post, Finish line 5 months, 1 week ago
ah no way its a typo
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janiceraquelamendonca commented on the post, The End 5 months, 2 weeks ago
LOVELY <3
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janiceraquelamendonca commented on the post, Moon in My Backyard 5 months, 2 weeks ago
I LOVE HAIKUS
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janiceraquelamendonca commented on the post, Fairies 5 months, 2 weeks ago
vivid and creative and descriptive
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janiceraquelamendonca commented on the post, Writing 5 months, 2 weeks ago
<3 i love this
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janiceraquelamendonca commented on the post, PROMPT #24 Delicate Brutality. 5 months, 2 weeks ago
the song <3
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janiceraquelamendonca commented on the post, Prompt #13 Sonder 5 months, 2 weeks ago
thank you <3
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janiceraquelamendonca wrote a new post, Finish line 5 months, 3 weeks ago
I made it to the finish line.
I conquered sleep
and fatigue.
I have my coffee to thank for mainly
putting in most of the effort.I made it,
We MADE IT.
HURRAY!-Janice Raquela Mendonca
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janiceraquelamendonca wrote a new post, PROMPT #24 Delicate Brutality. 5 months, 3 weeks ago
Delicate Brutality
You breathe purpose into this broken heart.
Your love is healing
it is in my blood.
I can feel you in the air tonight.
You shook me up
electrified
woke me up
my restless […]
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Interesting whatever the source of your serenity, a person or nature or even your inner self.
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the song <3
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First, to show that you are using someone else’s lyrics (from the song), you might want to write the song lyrics so they differ from your own words.
Your last line punches: “I am delicate brutality”
reveals the pain and pleasure of love, doesn’t it?These lines: “Love is all around // I feel it in my recess // I feel it in my bones” are not as strong as the rest of your poem. It feels less sincere, less heartfelt.
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Less sincere, less heartfelt — and too familiar, not uniquely you.
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janiceraquelamendonca wrote a new post, Prompt#23 Carefree days 5 months, 3 weeks ago
I came into this world with a bang.
On a stormy Thursday afternoon,
the trains stopped working,
the roads were flooded,
I came into this world with
5) the umbilical cord wrapped […] -
janiceraquelamendonca wrote a new post, Prompt #22 Autumn 5 months, 3 weeks ago
Leaves are ripe
with the colors of fall.
Vibrant hues of fiery red,
electric orange,
and calming yellow…
death looks so divine in
this quaint little town.Rows and rows
endless rows of
Maple tr […]
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janiceraquelamendonca wrote a new post, Prompt #21 Faithful Friend 5 months, 3 weeks ago
My furry friend
my faithful companion
my playmate
my guardian.You were always brave,
with those expressive eyes
you’d always manage to get your way.
Even when caught red handed…
Oh what simple pl […]
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janiceraquelamendonca wrote a new post, Prompt #20 5 months, 3 weeks ago
This one here is probably the most shittiest one I have attempted
There will be time, there will be time,
Time is generous,
Time is thoughtfully spared
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janiceraquelamendonca wrote a new post, Prompt #19 Heightened Sensitivity – A Collaboration with Numb -Prompt #4 5 months, 3 weeks ago
Prompt #4 Numb
Prompt #4 Numb
Posted on June 22, 2019 12:24pm EDT by janiceraquelamendoncaimage by poetry marathon
Dead from the inside
I am numb.
A complete shut down
unresponsive to the ext […]
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janiceraquelamendonca wrote a new post, Prompt #18 Dear Death, 5 months, 3 weeks ago
Dear Death,
How have you been?
it’s been a while
have you come to collect some souls?It’s not my time yet…
but, while you’re still here…
Join me for a strong coffee
I imagine your work must be […]
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janiceraquelamendonca wrote a new post, Prompt #17 5 months, 3 weeks ago
Wild child,
with dandelion dreams
painting clear skies
with dandelions
floating mid air
suspended in divinity
making wishes come true.Wild child with a wild heart
so open
so raw
so vul […]
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janiceraquelamendonca wrote a new post, Prompt #16 5 months, 3 weeks ago
A long hard road,
lay ahead of me.
I didn’t know how long it was,
I didn’t know when it would end.
So I kept walking through the forages
cutting past my doubts
facing my fears,
all the while
Dealing with […]
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janiceraquelamendonca wrote a new post, Poem #15 5 months, 3 weeks ago
Caffeine patrols,
Sugar rush
Guilty as charged
We keep marchin’ on.A brand new world
awaits me today
Imagination is on the loose
and creativity re-fueled.Let’s paint this town red.
-Janice […]
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“I have my coffee to thank for mainly
for putting in most of the effort.”
Did you mean to repeat “for” in both lines? The first one seems to hang without an object — but maybe that’s your intent?
ah no way its a typo