WOW! This is phenomenal.

I really enjoyed the repetition in this — “(Changes change us)”

This poem magnifies a feeling of peace in such an incredible way! I love especially the line: “Bones soften under permission to do nothing”

I really enjoyed this one! Your second stanza is so funny, so great!

I found this poem evocative & generally love how you explore this concept!

I love the empowering impact this poem and its title have!

The “fluttering” and how it manifests in the poem is so lovely!

I love the artful nuances of this & I beamed reading that ending, it is so sweet and joyful!

I connected with this one. Such an elegant entry & exit.

Linda, I love this poignant & playful poem!

I really enjoyed this! You paint a vivid picture. Love love this line: “This is the heartless Metropolis of my imagination.”

This is stunning. You’ve packed so much into these lines, in such a graceful way. The effect is dazzling.

Awesome poem w/ a satisfying ending! I loved this line: “And used my grapes to knock me flatus.” Haha

I adore this poem! It is so charming, the rhyme is wonderful & the ending is so sweet! Oh & the title, I just love the title for this!

Fantastic and beautifully woven together. Such a creatively exciting poem. The way you phrase things in that final stanza is brilliant. I absolutely love this one.

This charming poem put a smile on my face!

This poem was so uplifting! I love what is considered:
“Or is your night dark, and deep with pain, longing
for loved ones to visit, to come alongside and lift
you from your couch”

This poem was so enjoyable to read! I found these lines romantic & impactful:
“His eyes
wordlessly, not silently,
tell me he’d do it again”

What a haunting poem! I appreciated the determination of the ending.

I love how you’ve illustrated this concept. This is such a pleasure to read!