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jennifervera commented on the post, Hour Two: A Recipe for Christmas Eve Dinner 6 months, 3 weeks ago
WOW! This is phenomenal.
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jennifervera commented on the post, Hour Three: Not Feelin' Groovy 6 months, 3 weeks ago
I really enjoyed the repetition in this — “(Changes change us)”
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jennifervera commented on the post, Hour Six: Ocean View 6 months, 3 weeks ago
This poem magnifies a feeling of peace in such an incredible way! I love especially the line: “Bones soften under permission to do nothing”
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jennifervera commented on the post, Hour Eight: Emoji 6 months, 3 weeks ago
I really enjoyed this one! Your second stanza is so funny, so great!
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jennifervera commented on the post, Hour Ten: Bright Side 6 months, 3 weeks ago
I found this poem evocative & generally love how you explore this concept!
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jennifervera commented on the post, Hour Twelve: You Have the Power. Now Go Use It 6 months, 3 weeks ago
I love the empowering impact this poem and its title have!
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jennifervera commented on the post, For Susan B Anthony (Hour 1) 6 months, 3 weeks ago
The “fluttering” and how it manifests in the poem is so lovely!
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jennifervera commented on the post, Recipe Poem (Hour 2) 6 months, 3 weeks ago
I love the artful nuances of this & I beamed reading that ending, it is so sweet and joyful!
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jennifervera commented on the post, The Carver (Hour 5) 6 months, 3 weeks ago
I connected with this one. Such an elegant entry & exit.
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jennifervera commented on the post, Emo No No (Hour 8) 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Linda, I love this poignant & playful poem!
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jennifervera commented on the post, Metropolis (Hour 11) 6 months, 3 weeks ago
I really enjoyed this! You paint a vivid picture. Love love this line: “This is the heartless Metropolis of my imagination.”
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jennifervera commented on the post, A DAY MUST BEGIN WITH BIRDS 6 months, 3 weeks ago
This is stunning. You’ve packed so much into these lines, in such a graceful way. The effect is dazzling.
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jennifervera commented on the post, Hour 7 SEASON OF THE GRAPE 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Awesome poem w/ a satisfying ending! I loved this line: “And used my grapes to knock me flatus.” Haha
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jennifervera commented on the post, Hour 11 MY SPECIAL HOUSE 6 months, 3 weeks ago
I adore this poem! It is so charming, the rhyme is wonderful & the ending is so sweet! Oh & the title, I just love the title for this!
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jennifervera commented on the post, Hour 12 WHAT ARE THE ODDS? 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Fantastic and beautifully woven together. Such a creatively exciting poem. The way you phrase things in that final stanza is brilliant. I absolutely love this one.
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jennifervera commented on the post, Recipe For Surviving Dogs in the Morning_Prompt #2 kjkidder 6 months, 3 weeks ago
This charming poem put a smile on my face!
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jennifervera commented on the post, I Feel You – 5th hour poem 6 months, 3 weeks ago
This poem was so uplifting! I love what is considered:
“Or is your night dark, and deep with pain, longing
for loved ones to visit, to come alongside and lift
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jennifervera commented on the post, Celebrating Us – Prompt #6 6 months, 3 weeks ago
This poem was so enjoyable to read! I found these lines romantic & impactful:
“His eyes
wordlessly, not silently,
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jennifervera commented on the post, Prompt #10: poem in response to 'Moonshadow' 6 months, 3 weeks ago
What a haunting poem! I appreciated the determination of the ending.
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jennifervera commented on the post, prompt #12: first or last line (where everything is music) 6 months, 3 weeks ago
I love how you’ve illustrated this concept. This is such a pleasure to read!
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