I liked the personification in your last line. Poetry …is a she. 🙂 🙂

Darn it! I don’t know how to go back to my post to edit it. I’ll edit on my files for future use. Gracias. 🙂

Medical student or Doctor? Thank you for the lessons in pathology. 😉

Painful! You also created an acronym:
J
E
B

🙂

“A day that calls to the heart to sing…or brings bubbling words up to her skin.”

A wandering mind is a creative mind. Cool! 🙂

Many sad endings can become beautiful beginnings. Nice work.

Clever, clever, cleverly written. Do consider Vijaya’s suggestion about editing; it’ll have a better flow. 🙂

In an ideal world… But one can certainly hope and dream. Nice! 🙂

You wrote a clever summary of The Poetry Marathon. Try not to mix tenses: past, passive,…Other than that; I loved your poem, Hardika. 🙂 🙂

Yes, firsts and lasts are ever-lasting. I agree with Vijaya; edit or have somebody edit your lovely poem. 🙂

You should record this and play for Halloween. 👀👁😿

Nice, poetic story. 🙂

Good fatherly advice. Clever.

Nice rhythm, alliteration, and other stuff: Sometimes slipping; sometimes swimming…rising, dripping…Some stack stones. Beautiful imagery.

You have a creative sense of humor, shhh… 😉

Well, I simply love your creative mind, Anne. Great poetry. 🙂 🙂 🙂

You express your ideas beautifully. Love the winter/summer antithesis. 🙂

I love your awesome use of adjectives: snowy, shrieking, barbed wire, sweetening. Great imagery. 🙂

“It is a day that call to the heart to sing…or brings words bubbling up to her skin.” I love this part for its imagery. 🙂