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martinagallegos commented on the post, Prompt 24: What Poetry Did While We Slept in V2 4 years, 7 months ago
I liked the personification in your last line. Poetry …is a she. 🙂 🙂
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martinagallegos commented on the post, Alliteration: of sorts 4 years, 8 months ago
Darn it! I don’t know how to go back to my post to edit it. I’ll edit on my files for future use. Gracias. 🙂
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martinagallegos commented on the post, Ebola 4 years, 8 months ago
Medical student or Doctor? Thank you for the lessons in pathology. 😉
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martinagallegos commented on the post, Tetanus 4 years, 8 months ago
Painful! You also created an acronym:
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martinagallegos commented on the post, Poem no.22: January Joy 4 years, 8 months ago
“A day that calls to the heart to sing…or brings bubbling words up to her skin.”
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martinagallegos commented on the post, Done Wandering 4 years, 8 months ago
A wandering mind is a creative mind. Cool! 🙂
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martinagallegos commented on the post, Endings Are Beautiful 4 years, 8 months ago
Many sad endings can become beautiful beginnings. Nice work.
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martinagallegos commented on the post, An Amateur Poet 4 years, 8 months ago
Clever, clever, cleverly written. Do consider Vijaya’s suggestion about editing; it’ll have a better flow. 🙂
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martinagallegos commented on the post, No Boundaries 4 years, 8 months ago
In an ideal world… But one can certainly hope and dream. Nice! 🙂
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martinagallegos commented on the post, Drenched in poetry 4 years, 8 months ago
You wrote a clever summary of The Poetry Marathon. Try not to mix tenses: past, passive,…Other than that; I loved your poem, Hardika. 🙂 🙂
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martinagallegos commented on the post, The Last line 4 years, 8 months ago
Yes, firsts and lasts are ever-lasting. I agree with Vijaya; edit or have somebody edit your lovely poem. 🙂
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martinagallegos commented on the post, The Execution (Hour Nineteen) 4 years, 8 months ago
You should record this and play for Halloween. 👀👁😿
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martinagallegos commented on the post, The Girl Who is Left Wild (Hour Twenty) 4 years, 8 months ago
Nice, poetic story. 🙂
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martinagallegos commented on the post, Dear Daughter (Hour Twenty-One) 4 years, 8 months ago
Good fatherly advice. Clever.
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martinagallegos commented on the post, The River (Hour Twenty-Three) 4 years, 8 months ago
Nice rhythm, alliteration, and other stuff: Sometimes slipping; sometimes swimming…rising, dripping…Some stack stones. Beautiful imagery.
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martinagallegos commented on the post, Shhhhh, I'm Reading (Hour Twenty-Four) 4 years, 8 months ago
You have a creative sense of humor, shhh… 😉
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martinagallegos commented on the post, Poem no.19: Dialogue 4 years, 8 months ago
Well, I simply love your creative mind, Anne. Great poetry. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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martinagallegos commented on the post, Poem no. 20: The Summer Clock 4 years, 8 months ago
You express your ideas beautifully. Love the winter/summer antithesis. 🙂
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martinagallegos commented on the post, Poem no.21: This Page 4 years, 8 months ago
I love your awesome use of adjectives: snowy, shrieking, barbed wire, sweetening. Great imagery. 🙂
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martinagallegos commented on the post, Poem no.22: January Joy 4 years, 8 months ago
“It is a day that call to the heart to sing…or brings words bubbling up to her skin.” I love this part for its imagery. 🙂
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