A masterclass in the poetic voice! “I remember the circles of her smiles” and “Knowing my sky is open, throwing the rains down” Two of my favorite lines but really I would choose every line. Gorgeous piece!

Such a clever poem! Really enjoyed reading it! Well done!

Very honest poem. Lovely.

Fantastic, descriptive poem!

Interesting concept! What a unique poem, love it!

Such a sweet tribute, full of devotion! I have a Scottish background, so loved your use of the term ‘lass’!

This reminded me of sitting outside in nature, playing ukulele. Lovely!

This is such a relaxing poem! ‘The world just small splashes’ Fab line! Loved reading this!

‘Despite overcast behaviors’ A really cool line, awesome!

Such a powerful poem! The desire to know the future but afraid to find out, you describes it so well! Nice job!

‘Aging lion yawns’ Such a fantastic line! Really enjoyed this poem!

This poem speaks a thousand words in very few! So perfectly succinct! Awesome, Shloka!

This poem takes you on a journey! Love it!

What a cool poem! I envision a Picasso painting depicting this poem! Love it!

Such an emotionally available poem! Very moving!

Eloquent! I enjoyed it a lot!

This poem paints a picture, lovely!

Appreciate that Stef! 🙂

“When he danced there was lightning, when he sang, there was peace” Awesome! Loved it!