Make sure your shoestrings are tight
As you walk through life
Taking it all in stride
One step at a time
The beauty of life can’t help but enthrall
Moving along without the trip and the fall
Take it in stride as you take in it all
Avoiding lifes wayward call
Fantatic poem Mike and congratulations on finishing the full marathon! I love the flow and tone of this poem. I love the mixture of free verse and rhyming couplets. Good use of imagery and some common cliches reinforce good ideas!!! Eg., As you walk through Life…Taking it all in stride” Great poem and good use of many rehtorical devices.
I love the optimistic vibes !! The poem is really inspiring and motivational. Thank you for the priceless message you are conveying through your work. Good job really :))