I don’t want a Bad Day in Venus (Hour 6) Posted on June 27, 2020 2:40pm EDTJune 29, 2020 3:56pm EDT by Ofuma Agali Dawn had dimples on When she smiled across my day Spreading through sunset
I imagine the hours breezing throughout the day—a refreshing change from all the hustle and bustle. 🙂 Loved the line ‘dawn had dimples on’. Thanks Ofuma Agali. Reply
Thanks. I didn’t think much of it as I wrote it under pressure (like most others). But I think I am liking now as I read over and over again.
I imagine the hours breezing throughout the day—a refreshing change from all the hustle and bustle. 🙂 Loved the line ‘dawn had dimples on’. Thanks Ofuma Agali.
Thank you, Amana.
This poem made me smile widely! 🙂
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How beautifully you capture the perfection of morning!
Thanks. I didn’t think much of it as I wrote it under pressure (like most others). But I think I am liking now as I read over and over again.