Blue Clouds

 

 

Waking in the morning

Speaking me softly

Kisses by the winds of exchanges

Profound lines leading me to the cloud today

Heartwarming blue enveloping clouds

Seeing me making me wonders so immensely

Bewildered as always

Enchanting tales of new hope

New desires envelope as the blue clouds

Always hopeful and full of life echoing

 

 

 

6:06 PM PST 14/08/2016

 

© ROY MARK AZANZA CORRALES

One thought on “Blue Clouds

  1. I enjoyed reading this poem and was caught up in much of the imagery-beautiful! I love alliteration and you used it well e.g, “speaking me softly. I loved the tone of the poem…light and soft like the language that you used.

    My only comment is one line in the poem- Kisses by the winds of exchanges…did you mean wind of change…exchanges is good but this line is hard to read…too many syllables and exchanges is a harder word…just my thoughts…all the other words are so soft…

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