Early morning and I’m awake
Walking down to the local farmers’ market
Always dogs, sun-warmed coarse fur to pet
Waiting patiently for owners to purchase
Bakery stand with chocolate bear claws
Toasted brown pastry crumbles, dark gooey filling
Glistening fruits fresh smell divine
Muted blueberries, deep blackberries, ruby strawberries
Honey sticks of varied flavors, so many colors
Carefully select some of each for a rainbow bunch
Clutching my bear claw and canvas bag of goods
Return home with the bounty, oh so sweet
You’re really strong in your description of places – you catch the atmosphere completely and carefully add just enough sensory detail (the colours and scents of fruit, the texture of the dog fur and the chocolate bear claws). Your poem takes us perfectly on this journey.