{"id":38215,"date":"2017-08-05T20:35:03","date_gmt":"2017-08-06T00:35:03","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/thepoetrymarathon.com\/blog\/?p=38215"},"modified":"2017-08-05T20:35:03","modified_gmt":"2017-08-06T00:35:03","slug":"hour-eleven-14","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/thepoetrymarathon.com\/blog\/2017\/08\/hour-eleven-14\/","title":{"rendered":"Hour Eleven"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I prepared for two whole days before this marathon. I reviewed my poetry already written, reviewed old prompts from past years and played with possibilities, wrote a couple poems for practice. I was totally on board and ready for today. Then I woke up with a very sore throat, ten minutes before the first one was due, and dragged myself to my computer. Despite everything, I could not stay awake and could not think poetic thoughts, could not feel any emotions aside from a desperate need to go back to bed. I stayed with it for three hours anyway. I am disappointed, deeply sad that this event that was so important to me could not go as planned.<\/p>\n<p>After sleeping a few hours, I still don&#8217;t feel great, but at least I&#8217;m not falling asleep on my keyboard and waking up with seventeen rows of the letter N where a poem should be.<\/p>\n<p>I have reviewed the prompts given, and the one that spoke to me the most so far was Hour Five, a childhood memory.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Redwood Cathedral<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>What do I remember most?<\/p>\n<p>The smell of redwood dust<\/p>\n<p>Every inch of ground was made of<\/p>\n<p>Pulverized redwood from the centuries of rotting logs<\/p>\n<p>It was a summer campground under tall, tall trees<\/p>\n<p>Many numbered clearings formed the rented sites<\/p>\n<p>Each with water, hookups, a ring of stones<\/p>\n<p>Containing ash and charcoal<\/p>\n<p>Daddy loved to build the fire<\/p>\n<p>Mommy loved to cook over it<\/p>\n<p>What is it about food cooked over fire<\/p>\n<p>That tastes ten times better?<\/p>\n<p>Every campsite backed up to wild redwood forest<\/p>\n<p>Each with a character all its own<\/p>\n<p>Each year, a different site we chose to occupy<\/p>\n<p>Each year, new explorations to be made<\/p>\n<p>The seeming-untouched wildness drew me<\/p>\n<p>I a child of eight or nine or ten<\/p>\n<p>Always in my thick soled flip-flops<\/p>\n<p>Set off alone to see what I could see<\/p>\n<p>Even as a little one I sensed, I loved<\/p>\n<p>How spiritual it felt among the shrubs and ferns<\/p>\n<p>So far below the roof of greenery, the redwood canopy<\/p>\n<p>Perhaps the residue of happy times<\/p>\n<p>Rituals of growth and gratitude and familial love<\/p>\n<p>Practiced by the native peoples who once dwelled<\/p>\n<p>Who worshipped everything they saw and felt<\/p>\n<p>Emotions not unlike the way a child like me<\/p>\n<p>Experienced the green<\/p>\n<p>The sunwashed yellow green above<\/p>\n<p>The dappled ground around me, undisturbed<\/p>\n<p>By any human feet<\/p>\n<p>Yet always full of motion, tiny changes<\/p>\n<p>Full of unexpected wonders<\/p>\n<p>A cathedral built of close set living redwood trees<\/p>\n<p>Standing in a circle close together, so close they all were touching<\/p>\n<p>The stump of long dead mother tree<\/p>\n<p>Inside it, and one gap, one tree<\/p>\n<p>That wasn&#8217;t there, as if,<\/p>\n<p>As if to welcome a footed occupant<\/p>\n<p>To come inside, stand against the mother tree<\/p>\n<p>Look up and see<\/p>\n<p>A redwood starburst shape<\/p>\n<p>Converging on a pulsing, sunny center<\/p>\n<p>Brilliant yellow green with beams<\/p>\n<p>That shot down on my head and shoulders<\/p>\n<p>Ever moving, ever changing, warm and sweet<\/p>\n<p>Blessing me like God.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>~~~~~~~~<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I prepared for two whole days before this marathon. I reviewed my poetry already written, reviewed old prompts from past years and played with possibilities, wrote a couple poems for practice. I was totally on board and ready for today. 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