mandarin light of dawn floods the room
surprised and blinking,
I embrace the fire
descending down to slumber all to soon
colorless light of day fills the room.
fire of dreams, I hold you passion
tenderly inside, as the lull of everyday
will get things done.
love ‘mandarin light of dawn’ and ‘fire of dreams’ – so visual and strong; but especially ‘the lull of everyday will get things done.’ Both Zen and pragmatic. Nice!! Thank you.
thank you. glad you liked it! I wasn’t sure about using mandarin.