3 thoughts on “#23 Cleansing

  1. I can only just imagine!!! And by ladder, no doubt! I love how the words you chose for this poem are big and heavy with consonants, making the reader feel the sense of duty and chore to keep these shining brightly!

  2. Thank you Christy, I appreciate what you said about heavy consonants. Interesting I dint notice that, but did feel it in my body as I wrote. I was also thinking of the tension between wealth/glitter and labor/practicality. Metaphorically, of course is always the tension between spirit and secular, but which is which?

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