At All Times (Ecclesiastes 12-1-8)
~ by D², @d2poetry
be vigilant in your
pleasure
be mindful of the
source
be aware
that all you do
will be judged
encourage seedlings
to grow
for new buds
need fresh water
~ by D², 8.06.17, 5:49 AM
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Fresh, wise, apt and beautifully crafted. Love this!
Thanks Anne! I appreciate your reading and feedback
I like how you created both admonition and motivation for good ways in a way that is accessible to readers.
The final stanza’s analogy between fresh water for plants and good role models for children is profound, simple, and effective.
Thanks for reading my poem and sharing your gracious insights. This means so much to me as I focus on braving the task to become more published.
Pulling that oar right beside you.
😉