why do we still say
Pledge of Allegiance teacher
when our country does much wrong?
we pledge allegiance
to remind us of the way
so we do not remain lost
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why do we still say
Pledge of Allegiance teacher
when our country does much wrong?
we pledge allegiance
to remind us of the way
so we do not remain lost
I like the form you chose with these two perspectives on a contentious topic. The questioning at the end of the first creates a cynical tone as the second one responds in a candid tone causing one to ponder.