The Poetry Marathon 2022 – Hour 23
Original Poetry by DS Coremans
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Verse Form (Broken) – Tender Buttons
Are there words to put you into yellow,
red, aquamarine, turquoise dream
aesthetic value corporations mellow
outright rage or passive fury scream
a little quieter please that echo in
a little glass drum is distracting
me or you, can you hear that too? Sin,
well not a saint or pontification
participation in a daily ritual never
a chore always a pleasure not like
that isn’t a star, isn’t, is, I/sever
the artery
watch it bleed
Break the line,
lose the echo
Lose the rhyme… … …
…the rhyme is gone now
…lose the the the… … …
…Lost…
2022©DSCoremans
This poem was inspired by Gertrude Stein’s Tender Buttons.
Additional Poems
Cinquain – Nothing
Can you
define nothing
or the absence of real
which has been replaced by the most
bizarre.
2022©DSCoremans

Love this, can really see Gertrude Stien’s influence here.
I love how you go from hurriedness to slowly falling after the loosening.