10 thoughts on “Hour 11: Prompt 11: The Awakening

  1. This is beautiful Jane and there is great beauty in simplicity and straightforwardness. I love your alliteration and your last two lines are so heart-felt!
    …”But in my heart lies a soul wishing to live in the sunshine. This is lovely!

  2. This is poignant. the poet has a simple wish, to live in another place. What makes this striking for this reader is that it is simple and straightorward. There are no embellishments, nothing flowery. It’s just heartfelt statements that go to the core.

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