a moment in life
a pleasure to live
in any way is fine
around a table
in the house
in the church
with tears of joy
… or
with tears of sorrow
it’s a unique joy
to share with others
the joy of gathering around
(Hour 12-@Mejia)
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
a moment in life
a pleasure to live
in any way is fine
around a table
in the house
in the church
with tears of joy
… or
with tears of sorrow
it’s a unique joy
to share with others
the joy of gathering around
(Hour 12-@Mejia)
A sweet, pleasant piece.
Thank you for the kind words.
What a lovely poem.
Have you heard this by Joy Harjo? “Perhaps the World Ends Here”
https://youtu.be/0ymiWUHjrVc
If you cannot click this, just copy and then paste this. Joy Harjo’s other poems are powerful and simple, too.
WOW! What a lovely poem and suggestion. Thank you, Jan.
I love this so much. The layout is creative and brings a joy of it’s own.
Thank you for your kind comment.
Simple yet profound. Really like the rhythm of the concept. You did a nice job of juxtaposing some very disparate feelings.
Thank you for your kind comment. I love the concept of juxtaposing images.
Loved this so much…a sharing of gathering or a gathering of sharing, joy both ways
Great way to analyze the poem. Thank you!