12 thoughts on “Alliteration: of sorts

  1. I love lyrical poems and I enjoyed this alliteration-and the irony of the title 🙂 Well done. At times, the flow was interrupted-agree with Paul…delight.stops.it Delight is such a hard word for a soft terms…and often overused. Otherwise, the poem was playful, light and loved !

  2. This trips off the tongue and the alliteration keeps the reader dancing: also the smart work with ‘lives’ and er ‘lives’ at the very end stops us from getting complacent and brings everything together beautifully!

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