Chores and kids seems to go together; Do the dishes, Stop doodling silly wishes, Get the fishes, Clean the peaches, You're not allowed alone on beaches; Responsibly learn what life teaches. But should chores and teens sing the same chorus? Go do the laundry, Hands off the pantry, Stop being lazy, are you gentry? You came late! You're passing your boundry! Babysit your siblings - I appoint you sentry, Study hard and be a blessing to your country. I'm not trying to express feelings of dissatisfaction; Actually - I am. Yet the main point still centers that chores are a major inconvience at large in the society we live in.
I enjoyed the assonance. The lines had a musicality, too, in the imperfect rhyme. I like the dark humor in “‘m not trying to express feelings/of dissatisfaction; Actually – I am.”
Thank you for honest remark regarding my poem. I’m glad you enjoyed reading it.
My younger self felt this. Like a monologue in song. Lovely rhyming.