melancholy storm
a bare electrical charge
sliding over skin
Tracy Plath
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blue clouds.
I’ve passed this one by several times because it is so short and short ones take a different kind of attention.
It works perfectly with the photo
I notice the clouds are blue, not the standard black or grey or dark, and the specificity gets my interest. You empathize with the storm.
I just can’t decide whether the storm is like a bare electrical charge or he sliding charge is a result of the storm and that enhances my enjoyment as long as I don;t have to explain my reaction.
I’ve worked with electricity and never has it slide, so this is a special storm, a special world that behaves unexpectedly.
Short poems are more work to read and really read
blue clouds.
I’ve passed this one by several times because it is so short and short ones take a different kind of attention.
It works perfectly with the photo
I notice the clouds are blue, not the standard black or grey or dark, and the specificity gets my interest. You empathize with the storm.
I just can’t decide whether the storm is like a bare electrical charge or he sliding charge is a result of the storm and that enhances my enjoyment as long as I don;t have to explain my reaction.
I’ve worked with electricity and never has it slide, so this is a special storm, a special world that behaves unexpectedly.
Short poems are more work to read and really read