3 thoughts on “12 (1)

  1. Wow the poem fits in really as we are having the RIO olympics !! I love the image you depicted at the end. A coach or a mentor who cares for his subordinates and doens’t surrender despite the defeat. I like that spirit really :)) Thank you for this heartfelt message !!

    1. Thank you, that was the idea! I was so down after our basketball team has lost the game miserably, and our swimmers haven’t done well either, though they were so likely to get medals… So I just took the way I felt, took the prompt and wrote a poem to make myself feel better 🙂

  2. I found this poem memorable and very enjoyable to read. I love your terms and imagery…”solo athlete”…there is time and other rounds…I took and understood us as the “solo athletes”…great comparison and ironic with the Olympics! Very nice. I enjoyed reading this poem very much!

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