Hour 1 – all in a day

random conversations :

cultural, spiritual, artistic

 

words stacked

one

on

the

other

 

sounds bubble over

 

all play,together, in my mind

making me analyse and think,

making me hit replay.

 

they sink slowly

into the warmth of steam

dissolve in the void till

solemn silences subdue

 

difficult thoughts of loneliness

and pain

lost in the lather

of soap and a warm bath

 

 

2 thoughts on “Hour 1 – all in a day

  1. The way you used spacing and alliteration helped give me that feeling of going from a busy mind to slowly melting into a hot bath. All the S words (sink, steam, slowly, etc.) sounded like the hiss of water into a tub, the sound of bubble bath foam. Thank you.

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