You are not deserving of an origin story
and you will not be remembered
I know the deeds of your hands
they can never be truly cleaned
You are the monster here
I will send you back to Hell
These words you speak are empty
you and I both know this
Do not judge what you do not know
for what I did, I for you alone
I am the monster you created
In Hell I was formed and in Hell I will die
You are the asshole here
you have brought this chaos here
I am the one with integrity
yet see how you have deluded yourself
You are a cancer that must be excised
I will redeem this house
This game of yours grows old
yet you refuse to evolve
You lack the proof for your claims
your claim of honor is a lie
I am the evil that you needed
I will be the memory you cannot forget
This type of writing is my thing. I love the dark, the bitter. There’s a feeling of pain and anger here. The kind of anger that only comes from being hurt. “I am the evil that you needed.” Fantastic line.
Very well penned, very true to you. All around great. Maybe beef up some of the wording OR change the structure a touch – but I can see this going over very well with your typical audience and even building upon that audience as well.