In a dream I see you,
clear as light of day,
the smoke surrounding you vanished,
walls around you disappeared –
and you are no more than a memory
for me to forget.
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
In a dream I see you,
clear as light of day,
the smoke surrounding you vanished,
walls around you disappeared –
and you are no more than a memory
for me to forget.
I really like the fact that the smoke had vanished, not the person. The tension there is very intriguing.
Thanks, glad you liked it! 🙂