Elastic Limit (Hour 22) Posted on June 27, 2021 6:12am EDTJune 27, 2021 8:54am EDT by Ofuma Agali I left my body, running along the race lane. Now time to return. Written from Hour 22 text prompt.
This haiku is beautiful! Knowing at at which you write this (hour 22) this reflects the somewhat out of body experience. This is a wonderful traditional haiku. Beautiful Ofuma! Reply
This haiku is beautiful! Knowing at at which you write this (hour 22) this reflects the somewhat out of body experience. This is a wonderful traditional haiku. Beautiful Ofuma!
Thank you. It ends up as one of those quick fixes that seems to promise to endure.
Expansive idea,
stretches the reader’s mind with
taunt implications.
Well done!
Thank you. It was a near-breaking point poem.
Short but impactful – Well Done!
Thank you.