She craved three things in life:
Unconditional love,
honesty, and security.
Instead, she received
Being misunderstood, rejection,
And judgment.
She died hungry.
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She craved three things in life:
Unconditional love,
honesty, and security.
Instead, she received
Being misunderstood, rejection,
And judgment.
She died hungry.
Nice contrast with “craved” at the beginning and working systematically toward “She died hungry.”
The title is a nice touch, too. Immediately reading it, a vivid image came to mind.
Your last line – brilliant!
I just worship the ground that your all your poetries walks on.😍😍😍
Always bringing out new ideas 💓💓