–I don’t mind being neutralised
if that makes you happy
–reduce me –give me
electrons –give me
negativity –I’ve got room
on my shell –let’s go –let’s react
–oxidise yourself –shed everything
you want to lose
–I can take it
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
–I don’t mind being neutralised
if that makes you happy
–reduce me –give me
electrons –give me
negativity –I’ve got room
on my shell –let’s go –let’s react
–oxidise yourself –shed everything
you want to lose
–I can take it
Nice. I love it when scientific words are used in non-scientific settings, it helps to break down the walls between “Science” and “real life”. (Which is silly, because science IS “real life”.)
“Oxidise yourself” sounds vaguely insulting. I like it!
Thanks for the comment, Kwills. I’m a big fan of both science and poetry and am trying to theme as many of these poems around science as I can (so far, so good!)
‘oxidise yourself’ does sound quite insulting now that I think about it! Having loads of fun with all of this. Cheers 🙂