This is when the going gets random,
Surprise attack!
My word tank just ran empty,
there’s nowhere the words come from.
Should we retell the story of the ark?
Or sit at a quiet tea party?
I’d rather sugest silence to be a norm,
but I’m afraid that fact society lack;
It excels at bodyshaming, whispering ‘fatty’,
and a combination of red carpets and prom,
while it’s impossible to turn time back,
it’s time to quit acting so petty and be taciturn, for when we-
… listen
quietly
we’ll find
even in the silence
word are
spoken.
I enjoyed this. I might break that final down and space it out to slow it down. A line break after listen and before quietly injects a double meaning :
… listen
quietly
we’ll find
even in the silence
word are
spoken.
Food for thought. Enjoyed this!
Thank you so much for your opinion on this! Honestly, I’ve been thinking it was a little lumped up together, the last bit that is.