Flat
peeked down
discovered
layers below
each one under, oh
Earth, here I peer in fear
flat discs of planets, far, near
colors, and fiery warmth now sears
closer planets, Venus and Mars, red
Jupiter, Neptune, blue instead
now, suddenly in my view
cylindrical portals
appear thus anew
happy, I slide
new worlds guide
me to
space.
– Sandra Johnson, 9-2-2023
Such a great choice in your number of words per line! I also like the phrase ** flat discs… this gives a precise visual!! Well done!
Thanks for your input.