No Hope – Hour 24, Prompt 24 Posted on September 3, 2023 8:08am EDTSeptember 3, 2023 8:08am EDT by sandraj631968 End is near, I hope without a rope, I say nope blank mind, sleep, elope. – Sandra Johnson, 9-3-2023
Haha! I love this. You have certainly made it to the end; I felt like this too especially around hours 21-22: “I say nope blank mind” I love the sweet form and rhyming you did here. Reply
I do haiku at hour 24 because it’s the end and it’s easy. But lots of times it’s very powerful. Thank you.
Yes! I feel the same. Congratulations and thanks for this poem that certainly summed it up for me, too! Reply
Congrats on all 24 hours! Nice rhyming haiku too. “Blank mind” sums it up nicely…I felt that and I only did the half marathon. Reply
Nice rhyming poem
Thanks!
Haha! I love this. You have certainly made it to the end; I felt like this too especially around hours 21-22:
“I say nope
blank mind”
I love the sweet form and rhyming you did here.
I do haiku at hour 24 because it’s the end and it’s easy. But lots of times it’s very powerful. Thank you.
Yes! I feel the same. Congratulations and thanks for this poem that certainly summed it up for me, too!
Thanks!
You summarized the end of the marathon quite well.
This is great! Clever poem!
Captures the experience in a truthful and clever way.
You did it! And a great poem to end on.
Congrats on all 24 hours! Nice rhyming haiku too. “Blank mind” sums it up nicely…I felt that and I only did the half marathon.