“When Words Echo” A Viator
© A. Potter ~2023
when words echo
between the lines
we breathe, in or out
bleeding from thy pen
my eyes lifted
when words echo
memories better left behind
keeping one foot in the past
the caress, of the good times
etching the ache of the bad
when words echo
through the bloody chambers of my heart
running empty, towards the end
pleading, I was placated
my heart whispered ~ not again
when words echo
Nicely done! This seemed like one of the simple forms to work with – just moving the fist line down each succeeding stanza. But I do love experimenting with new forms from time to time, and this one works well. Thank you.
I absolutely adore simple forms. Thanks for reading 🙂