A young man stands still in the Soothsayer’s shack
“It is not strength, but patience you lack” ,
the seer says beneath a tattered hood
in a drafty cabin to the north of the wood
The knight huffs and turns upon his heel
but stops at the sound of a wheel’s dying squeal
A gentle voice gives thanks for a safe night passage
the crone asks the knight if he’s heard the old adage
regarding the actions of wise men and fools
of the ways in which our hearts rule
Before he can give the seer reply
the form of a maiden catches his eye
She opens her mouth but finds words she lacks
The knight then says “aye, this be the soothsayer’s shack”
He watches as she passes through the door frame
and from the old woman learns her name
But before he can ask of midnight passage
and her thoughts on a certain old adage
The seer’s eyes blacken and roll
her body contorts as the spirits take hold
The oracle speaks:
“I see a fighter, valiant and true,
a kind leader betrayed by two
but as the sun sets, so it shall rise
and there is power in knowing their lies
But for now, you must wait,
trust blindly in fate,
The pale rider stands by
with his discerning eye
Mind the cups that you pour,
and how the birds soar
With your people make good,
learn the ways of the wood
Heed the words of the Fool,
his irreverence for rule
for the Bard will sing tales
of how the wicked shall fail
You will bathe upon the hill
find your cups to be refilled
Two lovers will sit under the sun and the moon
Lovers they shall stay until they are entombed”
Color returns to the oracle’s eyes
Her body releases and she lets out a sigh
Go children, she says, there is much to be done
and as I have spoken, you must be the ones
The seer collapses onto the bedroll
in her shack
Go, she says, you cannot turn back
Beautifully written poems ma’am
Thank you for reading. I appreciate the kind words
Wow! This works on so many levels!
Thank you!!
Wow! An impressive work — written during just one hour!? It carried me through. I appreciated the storytelling, the rhyme, the imagery. Well done!
Thank you! The poems prior to this helped me build the story which was half the battle. By hour 12 I was in a flow state (and my kids were in bed)
Yes to the yes on this one! The narrative was fantastic, and I was propelled right along.
Thank you so much!
The literacy devices used well constructed. I love it with the rhymes 💕
I like the rhyme (unusual for me!) and it tells a wonderful story. It carried me on throughout the whole of the poem. Thank you!
Thanks! I’m actually not the biggest fan of rhyming poetry either so this was kind of out of my comfort zone. But it felt right given the theme. I’m glad you enjoyed it and appreciate the read!