Upon the turn of the century
We (I) beseech my nation
to redact our previous laws
to protect the population (fundamentalists)
These laws allow too much leeway (freedom)
to the people (masses) causing chaos (rebellion)
So in that regard we will redact (takeaway)
particular laws allowing women to make choices (rights)
Powerful response to the prompt on redaction. Enjoyed it.
Thank you so much! ☺️